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I tried to imagine some moment that is not directly mentioned in this chapter, and it's about Paul's dream while he was in a blackout . He's dreaming about Maya's sister Lysanna because she is part of him now ... I added few lines of text, thoughts that are rambling through his dazed head.
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awww- this is almost there but I feel some areas are weak points.
- The TYPE should have more variance and more graphic qualities.
- The orange yellow block looks like an afterthought. Overall the piece looks great but then I'm snapped out of the experience because the orange yellow block in perspective snaps me out of the imagery. It's like watching a realistic 3D animated movie where you forget that it's 3D then all of the sudden you notice something that's "off" and then you remember that you are watching a 3D movie
I hope you don't mind the constructive criticism, I think you do good work but I want you to make it GREAT
- The TYPE should have more variance and more graphic qualities.
- The orange yellow block looks like an afterthought. Overall the piece looks great but then I'm snapped out of the experience because the orange yellow block in perspective snaps me out of the imagery. It's like watching a realistic 3D animated movie where you forget that it's 3D then all of the sudden you notice something that's "off" and then you remember that you are watching a 3D movie
I hope you don't mind the constructive criticism, I think you do good work but I want you to make it GREAT